Friday, June 24, 2011

The BFG ( Big Friendly Giant)

Deep in the dark gloomy cave the BFG said to Sophie “ I need Frobscottle this instance” he said badly, Opening the cupboard to get the bottle for some whizzpopperz, he drank the whizzpopper then he flied into the air. “ Hey Sophie do want some whizzpopperz?”Said the BFG as he was walking to get frobscottle the bubbles down in stead of up. He really wanted Frobscottle badly.

Thursday, June 23, 2011

Making Movie Awards 2

What were you doing on Sunday 5 pm.? Guess what we were doing on Sunday evening? Some of our school went to the I AM MAKING MOVIES 2 AT THE AUCKLAND MUSEUM!. We all met at school first. I was so excited when I first stepped into the bus and sat with my friends.

The Presenters at the awards were Charlie from What Now and Robyn Malcolm. Our school’s Kapa Haka group were the first performance for the evening. The Pride Of Auckland was a choir that performed also and were the most amazing singers that I have ever heard.

This was my first time entering the I am Making Movies 2011. I enjoyed sitting on the comfortable chairs, me and my best friend Laita were sitting in the front row where there was a beautiful view.

Our movie was entered in the category BEST PRODUCTION we were so excited when our classes movie was shown on the big screen in front of all the other schools, then Charlie from WHAT NOW said “ Time to announce the winner” He called out DON'T FORGET YOUR ROOTS BY ROOM 13 KINGS AT PT ENGLAND” Me and my friend yelled “ Yeahhhhhhhh we won” Our class won a Sony Camera and Music Vouchers.
Robyn Malcolm announced the Supreme Award and called out “Pt England School Our History, Our Heritage” Then I yelled “ “Yeahhhhh our school has won another camera”

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Friday, June 3, 2011

Our Friends From Wake Forest


On Monday PT England School had friends from Wake Forest University. There were 9 students 1 student was in our class she was a pretty and friendly person, She was our friend and her name was Meagan she was a princess to our class room 13. We will miss them.

Wednesday, June 1, 2011

The Imaginary Resort At PT England

Finally we had reached the PT England Resort. We were going to be spending a whole week on a special outing with Thea and her Mum. I stared at the hotel standing in front of us then at the beach with it’s sparkling clear water. I saw an angel -fish go by “Mum look!”

We walked through the hotel door. A lady greeted us. “ Hello” she said “and welcome to the Pt England resort you can do anything you want here.” “Which activity should we do first ? The jet boat, The playground or the aquarium? Luckily we were here for a week.

Adding Detail to Sentence




A Genius invented the spaceship with his Assistants.
This person worked hard for a whole week to invent this spaceship with heaps of tools.
He collected lots of materials to invent his spaceship which was called room 13 kings.

This story shows you that I am learning how to add detail to sentences.